countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative developments?
By the means of new technologies, countries are having more similarities than ever before. I believe that these similarities are so beneficial for countries and its advantages outweigh its disadvantages.
just a few decades ago each country had its own unique products that displayed its cultures and beliefs, and by using those products people could get to know about the country. But nowadays products lost their originality and every product is just a copy of the earlier ones. For example, in the past Korean were well-known for their fabulous organic skincare products which most of them are now replaced with chemical skincare lines. In addition, with the advance in the transportation system products are being exported to different parts of the world. this made people more consumerism because they want everything that is available to them.
On the other hand, with the globalization of the world countries have access to various types of product and this gives everyone a fair chance of trying out new products. Latest technology will give people the same chance of being successful for instance, students from all over the world can use the same technology to do their projects and learn new stuff. Moreover, people's connection has become stronger bu using the same products. they do not feel different from each other and have something to share with each others.
In conclusion, people's lives have become completely revolutionized by globalization and having access to the same products has made many lives better and had many positive points.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22619047619 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77531636978 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587301587302 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3660335761 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.41666666667 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270741769163 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956499798377 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485654308591 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148586404346 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200608546715 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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