Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
People have different views about the influences of the increasing similarity between nations caused by the available access to by the same products all over the world. While the change is probably beneficial, I believe that it could also have several detrimental effects on the international socio-economic development
On the one hand, the phenomenon could have several benefits. As countries in the world have been considered a global village, global citizens generally have more varied options as well as have their quality of life enhanced. For example, these days, people generally find it unnecessary to travel to Japan to try Japanese sushi anymore, because there are a variety of restaurants within their cities able to provide the cuisine made by original Japanese cooks. Besides, the significant increase in the number of multinational businesses could result in a higher employment rate.
On the other hand, globalization might bring numerous considerable disadvantages. Firstly, countries are likely to encounter the risk of losing their cultural identity. Youngsters nowadays seemingly listen to the same kinds of pop music, wear the same styles of trendy fashion. Therefore, traditional customs seem to get less attention compared to the past and they are going to be possibly faded in the foreseeable future. Secondly, the change could cause declines in tourism numbers, causing a huge loss for the industry. It seems to be monotonous eating the same specialties and buying the same products when traveling and travelers would find places they visit appear to be indistinguishable to the previous destinations they have been.
In conclusion, despite the possible merits to improve quality of life, I strongly argue that globalization could cause serious disadvantages to the socio-economy of the world.
- Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society Because of this all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view 82
- Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choicesTo what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 78
- The graph below shows the consumption of 3 spreads from 1981 to 2007 73
- Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 89
- The chart below shows the percentage of difference in income between men and women form 1978 to 2008 78
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51245551601 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05574405221 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626334519573 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9304400356 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.083333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185594658797 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0521629328277 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562620605927 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0929280466461 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366038727745 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.23 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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