Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and environment as well.
What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?
The problem of environment, population and education which were always debatable has become more contentious with many people calming that it is hazardous while others disagree. In my opinion, all of the mentioned issues are increasing dramatically and it will be bought more drawbacks in next ten years. This essay will explain the reasons attributing to this trend along with remedial measures in the looming paragraphs.
To begin, there are numerous causes to destroy environment. Firstly, deforestation is one of the main reason for affecting atmosphere due to cutting trees. For example, in Bangladesh has only 25% of forest instead 40% as deforestation occur by some peoples. Moreover, many undeveloped countries have higher birth rate than developing countries due to luck of family planning and education. To take an example, a survey done by 'India Government' in 2019 around 20% of family have at least five children of each family in many rural area. Furthermore, some countries have inevitable demerits of education owing to over population. For instance, only 60% of population of Bangladesh educated because of densely population in village. Thus, It will be more with in next 10 years, if government should not take any measures.
However, every problem has some solutions. Besides, people should be used proper disposal system for waste garbage and planting more trees to make green world . In addition, authority can more concern about birth rate. If they provide workshop about family planning, would be less birth in future. Lastly, government should take some initiatives for education system , For example, providing distance learning to rural area where unable to commutate by road using advance technology. Hence, it is clearly stated that next 10 years we have to take above initiatives to prevent those issues.
In conclusion, according to the arguments mentioned above one can reach to conclusion that the problem of environment, population and education are too dire to ignore. nevertheless its potentials merits cannot be overlooked either.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s while others disagree. In my opinion, all of the mentioned issues are increasing dramati...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ample, a survey done by India Government in 2019 around 20% of family have at le...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...survey done by India Government in 2019 around 20% of family have at least five ...
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Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... planting more trees to make green world . In addition, authority can more concern...
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Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ut family planning, would be less birth in future. Lastly, government should take some i...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., would be less birth in future. Lastly, government should take some initiatives ...
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Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ke some initiatives for education system , For example, providing distance learnin...
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Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nevertheless
...n and education are too dire to ignore. nevertheless its potentials merits cannot be overloo...
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Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: nevertheless,
...n and education are too dire to ignore. nevertheless its potentials merits cannot be overloo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4012345679 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86518174613 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8081966531 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1052631579 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0526315789 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3157894737 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187367168553 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534884414341 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376589031031 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111936113065 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181607667377 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 194, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s while others disagree. In my opinion, all of the mentioned issues are increasing dramati...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 444, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ample, a survey done by India Government in 2019 around 20% of family have at le...
^^
Line 3, column 453, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...survey done by India Government in 2019 around 20% of family have at least five ...
^^
Line 5, column 159, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... planting more trees to make green world . In addition, authority can more concern...
^^
Line 5, column 288, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ut family planning, would be less birth in future. Lastly, government should take some i...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
..., would be less birth in future. Lastly, government should take some initiatives ...
^^
Line 5, column 368, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ke some initiatives for education system , For example, providing distance learnin...
^^
Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Nevertheless
...n and education are too dire to ignore. nevertheless its potentials merits cannot be overloo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 169, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: nevertheless,
...n and education are too dire to ignore. nevertheless its potentials merits cannot be overloo...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1750.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4012345679 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86518174613 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617283950617 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8081966531 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1052631579 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0526315789 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3157894737 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187367168553 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0534884414341 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0376589031031 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111936113065 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181607667377 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.06 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.