As countries have developed there has been a trend towards family sizes. Why does this happen? How does this affect society?
Undeniably, in economically developed nations many masses want to live in nuclear families there are many factors that influence folks for living in small family. In my opinion, two factors like education and inflation make small families and I intend to discuss reasons of this argument in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, in current era, many women are qualified and take job opportunity due to this both parents are workaholic so they can not pay attention on their several offspring. Moreover, education, medical facilities and so on might very expensive so populace could not fulfill needs of many juveniles. For instance, if one couple have one or two kids then they can provide all facilities to them and also better concentration on their moppets than four or five children. However, if nuclear families could more then it put positive and negative both effect on community.
Turning towards impacts, firstly overpopulation can be reduced to some extent and people may take more benefits with this. For example, if population could less then job opportunities might increase and all persons can get work due to this they may complete their basic needs like shelter food and house just because of this, poverty could also decrease. In addition, populace can easily up bring their youngsters and also provide good facility of education with this, children can become successful in their life due tot his country might also develop but on the other hand there might remain fewer young persons for work in upcoming years just because of this that nation can face anarchy of economic growth.
In conclusion, there are many factors due to this masses are giving importance to nuclear families however with this positive and negative impacts can be on community
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13448275862 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57898993031 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575862068966 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.0380329963 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.9 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.2 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147080130533 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0636750775127 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383584529937 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100202697583 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339770559475 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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