As countries have developed there has been a trend towards smaller family sizes. What do you think are the causes of this trend? How does this affect society?
Recently, there is a phenomenon that development of countries manifests itself in the family sizes reducing. As a result, this contributes to some changes, which will be discussed in this essay, in society.
Firstly, there are several positive effects of this issue. One of them is related to youngsters’ education. It is obvious that in developed countries, parents allot large amounts of money to teachers to educate their children. Hence, this turns into challenge, when a family has more than one offspring. Moreover, people’s financial potential cannot allow them to spend money on their all children occasionally. However, the size of nuclear family may play a role for this problem. In other words, it is more appropriate for some parents to provide one, or two children with education. Therefore, smaller families can affect education level directly in a country.
Regarding the negative impacts, smaller family can create problems related to the lack of the number of qualified staff for the development of a country. In fact, the average size of the families is proportional to the number of population. It should be taken into account that developed countries have high income thanks to their industrial sites as well. As a result of being unable to find more specialists, there will be a demand for them. In this case, employers will be obliged to offer workers from foreign countries. This means that, they will spend extra money for realizing this, and this will affect the amount of money they get.
To conclude, smaller family size can improve the education level because of the fact that every can afford to educate their children without financial problems. However, it should be accepted that in future the number of workers will turn into the difficulty to find more employee from native country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: BECAUSE_OF_THE_FACT_THAT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'because'.
Suggestion: because
...ly size can improve the education level because of the fact that every can afford to educate their child...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, well, in fact, as a result, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1540.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1677852349 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74268459989 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53355704698 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6629211119 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5555555556 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5555555556 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.88888888889 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186086000462 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0635330268585 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487921340393 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124580253093 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560218683997 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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