As countries have developed, there has been a trend towards smaller family size. Why does this happen ? How does this affect the society?
A country's development radically influences its society too, It is a fact that in the developing nations, there has been an attitude to have smaller famies. There are many rons for such a trend and also there are a few remarkable impacts on the society due to hic Both, the reasons and the consequences are discussed further.
Examining the causes, the most obvious reason is urbanization. Migration to meteors has led to social disintegration that is, from extended families to nuclear families. This has driven people to bear more financial burden. Therefore, both the partners smaller families, The other valid a good standard of living. Although, the per capita income has risen, it is very expensive to maintain a good lifestyle, This is because education, entertainment, medical facilities, travel and buying good homes to live have become heavenly expensive. Also, there is a competitive work culture which hardly leaves time for people to spend with their loved once. This has added to people's belief to have smaller families.
Referring to the effects, there can be both adverse and a good impact. The most damaging influence is on the overall psychology of people. By this I mean that social experts politeness, sharing, co-operation and acceptable public behaviour is vanishing quickly. Children form nuclear families are less social and lack good qualities. On the contrary, it is also have come up with some shocking observations saying that human virtues such as respect seen that there is more health, wealth and happiness amongst people. This can certainly led to a better society.
Thus, to conclude it can be said that with the progress of any nation, there would be a visible impact on its social life and the family size. In my opinion, it is a good trend as it can make world a better place with less population.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, therefore, thus, i mean, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01307189542 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74214165422 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.4821048152 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.2352941176 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.58823529412 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182636229514 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545900038135 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521912861849 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102959388715 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344209411714 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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