People want their country to host an international sporting events. Other believes that international sporting event bring more problems than benefits. Discuss both the points of view and give your opinion.
It is indeed true that there is often a great competition amongst the countries to host loternational sporting events. Many support such occurrence as they believe them advantae and so they wish their country to da sa; however, a few others say that the price involved in hosting such events is not warthwhile Therefor before attending my view, both opinions should be examined.
Discussing the views of those who desire their country to host International Sporting events, the biggest advantages is that a country would earn a good revenue in a short span of time. Due to the sporting events, local business and tourism enhances. This generates a good capital, which can be used later to find several public works All this can benefit of couritry in the long term. In addition, such events bring owner and prestige to the host countryV. THIS IN turn can promote business and tourism again. A good example is Brazil. Another benefit is that sports and sporting events are directly or indirectly promoted in the host country itself. It can strengthen political relations too.
However, the supporters of the opposite view have their own arguments. The biggest protest they have is of finance. Typically it can cost several millions pounds to build the stadium and Olympic villages and other related facilities, which later would stand empty. Moreover, there is a fear that such events can increase the crime rate and other illegal movement. Many also think that the regular trade, commerce and economic activities could be disturbed due to the hustle bustie.
To conclude and give my opinion, I would surely support the former opinion than the latter. It is indeed a matter of honour and prestige for a country and also in this manner sports and games are promoted. However, the government of the host country should be ready to fight the challenges that come on their way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, moreover, so, then, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1564.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96507936508 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51012562686 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55873015873 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.9715976047 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.8888888889 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94444444444 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.3058163807 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0829274973034 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808005902443 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173798731208 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678269439886 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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