Countries should not replace their traditional culture with modern culture. To what extent do you agree with?
In my opinion, I would like to keep our traditional cultures although our social is gradually modernizing. Because the good old things are unique to different cultures. Every country has their specific civilization which has represented their strong spirit in daily lifestyle until now. Such as Japanese, for instance, highly advanced technology as they are, they also protect their unique old-styled custom through tough times and up to now, their belief has been hugely affected by that tradition and widely spread from one to another such as Buddhism religion, tradition festivals, old temples or Kimono dresses,....To conclusion, the life will always move forward but the old special customs will never be out of date and it must not be replaced by all chances.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 108, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...gh our social is gradually modernizing. Because the good old things are unique to diffe...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...festivals, old temples or Kimono dresses,....To conclusion, the life will always m...
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Line 1, column 620, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
...vals, old temples or Kimono dresses,....To conclusion, the life will always move f...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 41.998997996 36% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 643.0 1615.20841683 40% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 123.0 315.596192385 39% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22764227642 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.33024571262 4.20363070211 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73731518849 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 176.041082164 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.79674796748 0.561755894193 142% => OK
syllable_count: 199.8 506.74238477 39% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 167.30884615 49.4020404114 339% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 160.75 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.75 20.7667163134 148% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117302549017 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06093292752 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0377042256069 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117302549017 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.6 13.0946893788 142% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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