Many people claim that creative artists should be free to express whatever they want in the way they choose without any rules, and no one has the right to prevent them from doing what they want. In my opinion, I disagree with this claim, and I see that ultimate freedom should not be given to anyone in the world.
Nowadays, there are many ways in which artists can express their ideas and their views either by words, music, painting, films, and many other ways. Furthermore, artists now can share their work easier than it has been ever using the internet, even though all this freedom and the available methods to express and publish their own ideas, artists still claim for the ultimate freedom and to remove all the government restrictions, which can lead to significant problems.
Giving the power of absolute freedom to creative artists, and let them express and present their ideas and views in whichever way they want will allow them to violate other's privet life, and make rumors about the ones that they do not like to destroy their lives, and bright the picture of those who they like. Moreover, the ultimate freedom allows artists to publish works that can abuse society's culture especially those conservative communities, and make fun about other's culture or even religion and holy subjects, as it happened once when an artist in Denmark publish some pictures that abuse the prophet Mohamed peace be upon him, and make fun about the Islam religion.
In conclusion, although the work of artists is crucial to society and culture, artists should respect the law and governments should make restrictive rules to keep them in their limits, as I believe, that whoever you are your freedom ends when you override other's freedom.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...films, and many other ways. Furthermore, artists now can share their work easier ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9186440678 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30077862993 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566101694915 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 20.2975951904 207% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.1442622838 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 207.285714286 106.682146367 194% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.1428571429 20.7667163134 203% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.384077475458 0.244688304435 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178201428435 0.084324248473 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0784018811766 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.228106399712 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0957766611533 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.8 13.0946893788 174% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.31 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.14 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.1190380762 186% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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