Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extend do you agree?
Our feelings, thoughts, voids, and pains are presented through arts such as acting, music and painting namely a few. Some people believe in the inappropriateness of letting artists openly show their thoughts and sentiments; the authorities are in charge of censorship. Nonetheless, to me it seems pointless limiting them; I believe liberating them lets the unsaid be told, helps the society grow and leads to a much creative community. Firstly, as every one of us has undergone, some things in life cannot be explained in words since they are incapable of conveyance, so the transmission key is in hands of arts. For instance, I always had a lot to say whereas I never could, now that I am participating in acting classes, I feel much better as I have found ways to express my emotions. Moreover, not everything is sayable; to faithfully deliver the message, more sophisticated tools are needed. Additionally, the more human beings keep their thoughts as secrets, the more they fall behind and vice-versa; that is, blocking people draws the society to a halt meeting opportunities. In the 21st century, the third world countries are the ones that have been restricting the artistic people for a long time. Furthermore, innovativeness comes where no one is terrified of openness. Galileo showed us how it was like to live in a reactionary regime as he discovered the global shape of the earth, dared to break the news, and how he confronted the suppressive consequences. Al-Hallaj, the Iranian mystic philosopher is another case in hand when said “I’m the truth” and was hanged mistaken for “I’m God.” To put it in a nutshell, even though some people find it unsuitable to allow artists to articulate, I am certain that no one has the right to circumscribe any creature; yet, it is not an absolutely implicit attitude.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, third, whereas, for instance, i feel, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1542.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03921568627 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16719779435 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637254901961 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 75.806953605 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.181818182 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8181818182 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.54545454545 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11330735909 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038229392338 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0265629333341 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11330735909 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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