Crime is big problem in the world: Many believe nothing can be done to prevent it. To what extend do you agree or disagree. Give your own opinion.
In today's world, the rise in Population has lead to various expediting problems. One of the major issue that we are dealing in the modern world is rising crime index. Many people have ambivalent views about crime prevention. Some people believe that crime is an ongoing issue and is very difficult to overcome. I agree with this statement to some extent but I do not completely accord with the statement that crime can be prevented.
At first, we need to look at the basic reasons for rampant crime activities. One of the prominent cause for someone to indulge in crime is unemployment. Youth are more likely to become stressed and less complacent if they do not have work. Idle young generation gets lured towards ill-advised activities for money. This empirical fact can be inferred by analyzing crime rates and unemployment in different countries. For instance, Developed countries like Canada, where many people are working, crime rates are lower. On the other hand, in overpopulated countries like India, crime rates are very high.
Next major cause of spreading crime is the political involvement in organized gangs. The spade of gangs related criminal incidents happen as a result of unchecked structured gangs. Many politicians are also involved in drug rackets. For example, Pakistani officials accused two federal cabinet ministers of their involvement in drug trafficking in 2016.
At the end, in my opinion, Crime is a difficult problem of the contemporary world. But, this issue can be tackled if governments start to play responsible roles in implementing tougher punishments for criminals. Governments and the general public need to play an important role by devising and formulating proper crime prevention strategy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, so, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25899280576 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86392387028 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611510791367 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.1622147986 49.4020404114 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.9473684211 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6315789474 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197604786746 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573646073536 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435350178738 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113348349429 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0550500363103 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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