The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent and solve crime.
Do you agree or disagree?
Crime is always being the critical issue in all over the world. Surprisingly it has shown some signs of decline as compared to past . A part of crowd opine that uncivilized acts are decreasing as a result of advancing technology. I agree with this given notion, as hi- tech equipments and gadgets assist the cops to catch the offenders within no time.
To commense it, in this hi-tech era for law enforcement, authorities are utilizing advanced equipments as a toll for controlling the crime rate. For example, to find out the exact criminal DNA testing is the only reliable method. If a person change his appearance through plastic surgery his DNA will be same so, one cannot escape from punishment. Furthermore, in public places like shopping malls, railway station and many more there are alarming system which started hooting if anyone who is passing through the security gate at the enterence is carrying any weapon or dangerous metalic equipment.
Since, culprits know that there are chances to cought red handed and get hunted by cops , as most of the places are under serveillance of security cameras. for instance, people are now using this gadgets even at home also for the safety purpose and with its assistance it become less burdensome for police to identify the person who have commit the felony. Moreover, everyone owns a smart phone now a days, whenever they saw anyone comitting any crime, one can take pictures as well as record it which can be used as an evidence to put the offender behind the bar.
In summary, it is undeniable that technological advancements put a huge impact all arround the world to control the crime and criminals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in summary, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1382.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90070921986 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64654783321 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.677304964539 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9521124614 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.166666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166623265579 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0572254184482 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0517419364992 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106643895862 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0394625966736 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.44 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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