Library should provide more books rather than invest in new technology such as e-books and computers. To what extent u agree?
Library is considered as a powerhouse of the knowledge, no matter which method is used to provide information. A part of crowd contend that knowledge should be provided through the papers so, libraries should invest more funds to add numerous books related to every fields rather than spending on hi-tech resources. However, I partly agree with the given notion, as I believe that both the resources have their own significance to fascinate readers in the library.
On the one hand, reading from books is the conventional method to gather information. As, not all the books are available on digital format, which means some specialized books are still available in the paper form. libraries should provide the access to the collection of these kind of rare books. Moreover, paper books are not easily lost unlike e-books, which can be deleted accidently and malfunction. Hence, paper books are most reliable. Likewise, e-books will have no access if the internet or hi-tech gadgets are not working properly. However in these cases the inconvenience could be avoided if enough books are available.
On the other hand, computers and e-books aid to avoid the expenses used for making huge storage space, as they allow to store profound knowledge in fraction of space. Furthermore, computers allow to locate information quickly and without any hustle, as well as it is more user friendly. By sitting in one place one can find and have access to many books at a time. Since, in this contemporary era everyone owns a smart phone, in which they can store e-books and can read it anywhere as per their need. In this way, it becomes handy for people to use technology to gather information.
In summary, considering the above said points, I believe that both the methods are equally important. So, library should invest equal funds for books as well as technological resources.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Libraries
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...provide the access to the collection of these kind of rare books. Moreover, paper books ar...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...-tech gadgets are not working properly. However in these cases the inconvenience could ...
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Message: Did you mean 'storing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: storing
...aking huge storage space, as they allow to store profound knowledge in fraction of space...
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Message: Did you mean 'locating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: locating
... of space. Furthermore, computers allow to locate information quickly and without any hus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, still, well, in summary, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.038585209 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69093990202 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572347266881 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0348592614 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.1764705882 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2941176471 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05882352941 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315189937772 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0956120669992 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771953626176 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190435291422 0.151304729494 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0569489851211 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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