There is no doubt that technological innovation has significantly influenced our every aspect of life. Owing to the advancement in technology, there has been a drastic reduction in crime rate, which has made some people think of harnessing this incredible power to counteract crimes. I do agree with this statement to some extent; however, I also believe that technology can breed new forms of offences unless it is used judiciously.
To begin with, technological equipment has assisted the security department to keep the crime rates at bay. This is because such instruments have facilitated the ways to collect evidence for a crime as well as to apprehend the culprit, which have resulted in resolution of some of the sophisticated cases in the history where the offenders did not even leave a single clue about committing the crime. For instance, the Forensic department of security branch is capable of detecting criminal by examining either their finger prints or DNA samples. What’s more, the government is now installing Close-circuit cameras on crime prone intersections of the cities. Such actions are not only used for surveillance but also they act as a deterrent for the criminals who are contemplating about committing crimes. Therefore, it is not hard to see that technology is playing a cardinal role in elimination of criminal activities in recent times.
Nevertheless, despite reinforcing the security departments against criminal threats, proliferation of technology also has the potential to give rise to wicked types of crimes. The reason behind this is that hackers and cyber criminals execute their vicious acts by utilizing the technology, which renders devastating effect to the community sufficient enough to obstruct the progress of a nation. To make matters worse, majority of these criminals have impressive technological skills that makes them almost immune to getting arrested for their crimes. In other words, since cyber criminals have the advantage of concealing their identity in the internet, such anonymity makes it harder for the security forces to locate the convicts. While criminals can gain their selfish motives by abusing the technology, people cannot blame technology for this. If people had embraced the altruistic side of technology only, then society would not have to deal with its dark side.
In conclusion, I think that although technology has blessed us with immense gifts to identify criminals and suppress crime rates, it has introduced new forms of crime at the same time. Technology can be used to curb offences at its full potential only if we apply it for the welfares of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 274, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
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Line 5, column 712, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'locating'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'force' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: locating
...makes it harder for the security forces to locate the convicts. While criminals can gain ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, no doubt, as well as, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2233.0 1615.20841683 138% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29146919431 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95497250272 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563981042654 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 720.9 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.2775797834 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.352941176 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8235294118 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.88235294118 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181095014659 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602572280835 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0506830834525 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127681042318 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0489536193004 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.7 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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