Crime rate in teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries in recent years. What are the causes, and what are the solutions?
In several parts of the world, there are an increasing number of young people committing crimes. This problem happens due to some reasons, and several measures could be proposed to reduce this rate.
To begin with, there are some reasons why more adolescents tend to commit crimes than in the past. The first one is that due to the rapid development of the internet, teenagers can have easily access to violent materials such as horror movies or video games. Consequently, these young individuals are likely to imitate those actions and then turn into criminals. Furthermore, parents nowadays often have more hectic schedules, which means they pay less attention to their children. As a result, adolescents could spend time with bad people, who may encourage the teenagers to get involved in crimes such as drug dealing.
However, the higher rate of young criminals can be handled by some remedies. One of the most feasible solutions would be for the government to restrict violent materials. This could be done by imposing an age limit for gory horror films. Additionally, parents should restrain their children from spending too much time on the internet. To illustrate, instead of letting teenagers play on their own with smartphones or computers, parents can stimulate them to take part in useful activities such as playing sports or going camping. The final measure is for schools to organize sessions to educate students about laws. This can assist these young individuals in raising awareness and avoiding committing crimes.
In conclusion, there are more adolescents becoming criminals due to the growth of the internet and their parents’ busy schedules. In order to reduce this rate, the government should restrict violent materials, and parents can limit the time spent on the internet of their children. Moreover, schools ought to teach their students about laws.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1582.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23841059603 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6602740505 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.579470198675 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2886182655 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0588235294 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7647058824 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94117647059 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0656758008765 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0210044707623 0.084324248473 25% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.021246217727 0.0667982634062 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0420698850068 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0148864471495 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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