Crime rates are likely to decline due to the advancements in technology. Which will help prevent and solve crimes in an easier way. Do you agree or disagree?
The invention of different unique technology can lead to decrease in the crime rates globally. Advancement in technology can help to mitigate with crime easily and quickly.
Although, technology plays a vital role in the security of modern era. To commence with, in the past the crime rates are very low as well as it was difficult for officers to detect the crime in a very early stage. In other words, nowadays police can easily track the suspect with the tracking devices. Crimes can be solved easily with the use of CCTV camera everywhere which can provides clues to the crime branch from the place of crime. For instance, many robbery cases can be solved by footage of cctv as they record every moment of crime. Eventhough, crime branches have installed a number of tracking applications because of which they can reach easily to the culprit and sometimes reaches before the mishappening occurs.
The upmost technology lessens the crime of fake documents. Few decades ago, people can easily do fraud with their documents, however, it is now impossible for those because each document got scanned in the verification process everywhere needed. For example, Government of India has launched adhar card system which bears someone's identity and fingerprints enrolled. Cheaters are unable to hide their identity it can be easily detected with their fingerprints. Moreover, crimes can be detected in a region with the help of drones which can cover the whole area while the officers are on reporting. Scan system Is increasing dramatically and the crime rates decline.
In conclusion, this essay discussed a number of ways by which technology caused to lessen the crime rate effortlessly. I totally agree with this notion because no one can deceive the computer system as it is a fastest working platform.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1516.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08724832215 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67309631307 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557046979866 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1554483723 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.75 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250063088326 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101597813604 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745070110285 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181543884684 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405373555984 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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