Crime rates in cities continues to a problem .r
What are the reason for this?
What problems might this cause?
It is true that the crime rate has been increased significantly in many countries. This essay will discuss the prime reasons for peaking the highest crime rate in urban areas and its problems which effect on society.
The first and foremost reason for rising criminal activities in a town is that the family issues especially, people from the broken or unstable family. Those people always have a tendency to do culprit with their friends in order to earn money or other personnel needs may be lack of attention from their family. In cities, it is more chances to involve crime with the help of modern technology like mobile phone than in the country side. Another issue is that unwanted peer relationship which creates criminal activity among people especially youngsters. This is due to the fact that the majority of offenders are often addicted to drugs, excessive alcohol intake, theft and It may lead to criminal behaviour. Consequently, these situations sometimes make them worse and eager to involve unusual activities in their life particularly, when people live in town.
The criminal activities will adversely affect both individual and society. Firstly, people who involved in certain activity will be isolated from the family and the community. This is because, people would be panicked about them, even if they bail from prison. As a result, many of them feel loneliness in society and also sometimes they may not get a decent job. Moreover, soaring crime rate in a city will seriously impact on the income of a nation especially in tourism sector. This is because, the number of tourists will be declined in that area instead they will find alternative places to visit. Hence, it is clear that massive crime rate not only generate a problem in family, but it also ruin the source of revenue.
To sum up, higher crime rate certainly creates many problems in a nation. However, this can be controlled easily if the authority takes proper measures right time.
- Crime rates in cities continues to a problem .rWhat are the reason for this?What problems might this cause? 47
- Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems.To what extend do you agree are disagree? 61
- Most people prefer ready to eat ready meals rather than home made for these days.What are the advantages and disadvantages? 67
- In some countries, young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting University studies. discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this. 67
- The bar charts below show UK and US energy consumption in 2000 and 2006 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...p of modern technology like mobile phone than in the country side. Another issue ...
^^
Line 3, column 697, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ruins'?
Suggestion: ruins
...nerate a problem in family, but it also ruin the source of revenue. To sum up, hi...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, as a result, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1652.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00606060606 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54746673714 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590909090909 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8128943734 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.1764705882 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4117647059 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.70588235294 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222276316458 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708127490351 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786593032177 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.169485367386 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0874307798219 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.