For many people, the reason they work hard is to earn money. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Acquiring a better amount of revenue is an integral part of common people for this, they really work hard. I firmly agree with this view due to some reasons which will discuss this essay.
It is true that the majority of people consider as a family is an important part of their personal life. In order to support the members of the family, they need to spend their quality time at the office or farm field. For example, it is commonly seen that today, a huge number of people in my country do extra hours because of avoiding the financial burden at home. Therefore, some of them even are forced to work more and more for sound family life as expenditure on families are not as small as compared to the past.
Another justification is that some people certainly work hard for a comfortable and luxuries life. In fact, such kind of people really gives more importance to social life for enjoyment and pleasure so they work hard on it too. To cite an example, numerous people nowadays spend their holidays on some well-known foreign countries such as the USA, Australia and so on where they often stay in star hotels as well as restaurants. Thus, this makes it clear that the reasons for earning money hardly in ones daily life.
To sum up, earning money is an indispensable part of the human being which spend on purposes. Some use their income for daily survival, whereas others utilize it for a massive enjoyment
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 185, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thers utilize it for a massive enjoyment
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, therefore, thus, well, whereas, for example, in fact, kind of, such as, as well as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.60869565217 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38551875812 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.3178088849 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226569830691 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0895206978931 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620309529058 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138965778949 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471370489179 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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