Crimes committed by young people are increasing in major cities throughout the world. Discuss the causes and how to solve for this problem
Juvenile deliquency is becoming increasingly popular in large cities for the time being. Mechanism and measures to tackle the phenomenon will be discussed below.
Shifts in economic and social structure, popularity of social media and peer pressure could be attributable to crime upsurge of young individuals. First, global economic success in recent years has stimulated changes in material wealth and societal status of many people. However, there are yet young people who are unable to take advantage of economic development due to lack of capital and education. These individuals often come from unprivileged background, which disables them to compete with others in competitive labor market. In this case, disadvantaged juveniles would feel desparate and start to violate codes of conduct and break the law. In addition, it is common that young persons are encouraged by law-breaking acts, which are rife on social media, thereby imitating such behaviors. This stems from the fact that young minds are prone to external factors, given popularity of online social media platform, they stand a higher chance of violating regulations. Likewise, pressure from friends or like-minded people are another contribution to criminal behaviors of the young. If children grew up in neighborhoods, in which crimes are widespread, they would be likely to make similar mistakes. Thus, diffrences between haves and have nots, social media, and negative impacts from acquaintances would potentially encourage the immature to offend legal system.
To tackle high crime rate among teenagers, intergrated approaches can be implemented by governments. The first solution is that tighter control over online social websites should be implemented. Graphic contents including images and videos presenting violation of law should be banned. Another measure is that parental roles should be punished due to lack of supervision over children. Finally, social campaigns can be undertaken to raise awareness of young people.
In sum, several factors are causing increase number of young law-offenders. The authorities can seize control over the internet and impose new regulations to alliviate the movement.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, likewise, so, thus, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1862.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.65957446809 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92185969344 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.650455927052 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 589.5 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7046281751 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.0 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3157894737 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42105263158 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135317053175 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.041335723084 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430280256973 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0875934312262 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383385252306 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.25 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.43 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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