In some countries, people are having children at a later age in life. What are the reasons? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It has become increasingly common that married individuals delay having babies. This essay will discuss the causes behind the phenomonon and explain why the benefits of the movement is weightier its drawbacks.
The change in people's perspective about material wealth, and career can be attributable to parenthood delaying among married couples. As the living standard of the general population has witnessed improvement in recent decades. People have a tendency to supply their children with the best products and services. Young people who are less likely to afford high quality education, nutrition, in the first place, may spend more time to accrue sufficient financial resources in order to do so. Another contributor to postponing pregnancy is originated from the shift in the labor market. Young wage-earners, under the pressure of heavy workload and working hours extension, which are rife in the modern workplaces, would find it difficult to budget the time for their family. Having babies thus appear as impossible for them.
While delaying parenting may merits ones' preparations for becoming parents and career progress, this may imply repercurssions on their ability to giving birth. It is proven that pregnant females over 35 years old, can be vunerable to certain risks of childbirth including health deterioration, certain diseases, and so forth. Notwithstanding the facts, given the advancement in medical sector in recent years, giving birth in older ages is no longer a problem. With the support from new methods, cutting-edge technology, and skilled medical workers, the process from reproduction until childbirth is easier than ever for women. On top of this, better education and adequate intake of nutrients would pave the way for the future psychological and physical development of children, who play an important role in the well-being and posperity of society.
In sum, the shift in married people's view about monetary accumulation and working enviroment are the main culprit of having children later in life. The merits from the devlopment would eclipse its effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, thus, well, while, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1781.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88640969835 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 211.0 176.041082164 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649230769231 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0505918278 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.3125 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.875 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117504796679 0.244688304435 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0369268048245 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545128111856 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0768761769944 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.054915601078 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.5 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 78.4519038076 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.