Conventions and cultures have always experienced alterations during the time and unfortunately, some of them are exposed to extinction. There are some reasons bring about this kind of issue, effective measures can be adopted to get to the behind of the situation.
As regards to root causes, there are two which should be taken into consideration. Firstly, technology advancements have played a substantial role in converting people’s beliefs. Technology causes people from distinctive cultures with specific customs connect swimmingly. This relationships have brought about cultures and traditions have been influenced during long years. Secondly, inconsiderate parents are other contributing factors who should not be ignored. These kinds of parents do not care about traditions, never talking about these valuable properties to their children, so this leads to descendant will not familiar with their ancestral culture and do not do any effective action to preserve their heritage.
Nevertheless, there are some potential solutions which can be beneficial to cope with this phenomenon. The first one is that governments should encourage people to cherish their culture and traditional beliefs, this can be done by providing conditions to execute and celebrate traditional ceremonies. Doing these, enable cultures to resist the invasion of foreign cultures which can permeate either through tourism industry or new means of connections such as Telegram and Facebook. Ashura in Iran which is a religious ceremony held annually, for instance, is one of the most effective actions supported by the government. Moreover, parents should not shrink from their integral responsibility to instil their indigenous culture and traditional beliefs. In fact, if they transfer these precious properties to their children can play a leading role to preserve cultural heritage and conventions.
In conclusion, changing cultures and disappearing some conventions have been a conspicuous phenomenon. Inventing new technologies and indifference of parents towards transferring their heritage to children are behind this event. Both governments and parents are two powerful arms to remedy this trend.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 278, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, as regards, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82608695652 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11559877875 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574534161491 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.347104225 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.352941176 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9411764706 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.94117647059 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225246603171 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730353176968 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531813882441 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133636560685 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.045309135327 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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