Cycling has many benefits, yet in some countries there is a decrease in the number of people using bicycles as their main form of transportation. Why is it happening? Give suggestions how to encourage people to use bicycles again.
since rapid and comfortable modes of transportation has come to an existence, bicycles has been put on back seat by folks. Even though riding bicycle has ample benefits, still people seems to be giving importance to other means of transportation over bicycle. This essay will examine the reason of declining use of bicycle with some suggestions to boost up the use of bicycle
There are multifarious reason behind decreasing use of bicycle lately. First and foremost, It is next to impossible to cover long journeys in less time by using bicycle. Thus, people started using other fast modes of transportation in order to complete long journeys in no time. In addition, other modern means like as car, motorbike etc. are way too comfortable as compare to bicycle, this feature has led people to choose them as their main mode of transportation
Further emphasizing on my point of views, in today's cosmetic world, luxurious and other vehicle are considered as the status of symbol while use of bicycle is shame for some people. hence, this trend has encouraged people to change their mode of transport to other better available options instead of sticking with old fashioned bicycle. Furthermore, bicycle can transport maximum 2 people at one time where as other means of transport has plenty of space for a family to commute all together. Thence, people started forgetting bicycle as their main mean of transportation.
Manifold steps can be taken in order to encourage people to use bicycle. To start with, government should run some campaigns which highlight the benefits of using bicycle and people with obesity ought to be made target so that they can attain benefits of using bicycle and keep themselves fit. Adding to it, people shell be made aware that how they are getting ripped of with the use of expansive cars and bikes for the rides which they can cover through bicycle
To recapitulate, bicycle are very cheap to travel and key to stay fit on the same time. We cannot neglect the fact that modern means of transportation are quick and comfortable but lets not forget the unique benefits of using bicycle. Hence, possible journey's should be made through bicycle
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'first', 'furthermore', 'hence', 'if', 'so', 'still', 'then', 'thus', 'while', 'in addition', 'to start with']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.270202020202 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.179292929293 0.155533422707 115% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0959595959596 0.0946595960268 101% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0328282828283 0.0501214627716 65% => OK
Pronouns: 0.030303030303 0.0437548338989 69% => OK
Prepositions: 0.151515151515 0.122226691241 124% => OK
Participles: 0.0606060606061 0.0403226058552 150% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.68170060008 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0505050505051 0.0326793684256 155% => OK
Particles: 0.00252525252525 0.00163938923432 154% => OK
Determiners: 0.0479797979798 0.0861772015684 56% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0227272727273 0.021408717616 106% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.010101010101 0.011925033212 85% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2174.0 1933.35771543 112% => OK
No of words: 365.0 316.048096192 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.95616438356 6.12580529183 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20517956788 104% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.350684931507 0.374742101984 94% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.241095890411 0.28420135186 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.156164383562 0.203846283523 77% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.106849315068 0.137316102897 78% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68170060008 2.80594681477 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.037074148 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534246575342 0.56093040696 95% => OK
Word variations: 58.4257694895 60.7387585426 96% => OK
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0891783567 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.3333333333 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.3381306798 49.517814964 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.933333333 127.492653851 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7743622355 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 0.814263465372 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 3.99599198397 150% => OK
Readability: 48.4429223744 49.1944974215 98% => OK
Elegance: 1.98958333333 1.69124875643 118% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420357765588 0.332605444948 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.152280188234 0.102741220458 148% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0920918297103 0.0668466124924 138% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.563395641212 0.534860350844 105% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.138876835264 0.148594505496 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.181771135165 0.134430193775 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724117874964 0.0742795772207 97% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.39239838731 0.324371583561 121% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0346415590279 0.0638462369009 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.279860099091 0.228012699653 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678490154448 0.058150111329 117% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.68436873747 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 12.0 10.4468937876 115% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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