As the progress in transportation nowadays, people are less likely to ride a bike to transport than they used to do in the past. The trend of less bike riding is worldwide and unchangeable, somehow, is an environmental issue drawn our attention. Here in this essay, we shall discuss about the reasons and the solutions respectively.
The explanations for every including me to abandon bicycles are twofold; firstly, distance community to work in daily life is exhausted especially early in the morning or late time at the dawn. Because the job needs our energy, attention and sometimes even our time to fulfil, most of the communicators rather to take that crowded public transportation instead of riding a bicycle. Secondly, the metropolitan urban life force the public construction designed for the majority, which are the communicators. On the contrast, the bike-riders are minority who are less important for the city. As a consequence, no facilities for bike users such as parking spaces, paved trails, or service stations…etc.
However, the government can play an essential role on the benign influences for the public environment by setting some rules. For the communicator, public transportation connect with public rent bike is a perfect solution. For instance, the U-bike in Taipei, stands for a good example for providing us such amusement and convenience. Furthermore, the city government can build more parking spaces and maintain stations together with the public rented bike facilities.
To summarize, the change of transportation is unavoidable, but government can also adjust their policy to comply with people’s need. As a successful example, Taipei shows that encouraging is one of the best way to set to policy for environment.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'first', 'firstly', 'furthermore', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for instance', 'such as']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258675078864 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.135646687697 0.155533422707 87% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0851735015773 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0536277602524 0.0501214627716 107% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0252365930599 0.0437548338989 58% => OK
Prepositions: 0.11356466877 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0252365930599 0.0403226058552 63% => OK
Conjunctions: 3.23939988801 2.80594681477 115% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0347003154574 0.0326793684256 106% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.123028391167 0.0861772015684 143% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.01261829653 0.021408717616 59% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00630914826498 0.011925033212 53% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1778.0 1933.35771543 92% => OK
No of words: 277.0 316.048096192 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.41877256318 6.12580529183 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20517956788 97% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.389891696751 0.374742101984 104% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.303249097473 0.28420135186 107% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.234657039711 0.203846283523 115% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.184115523466 0.137316102897 134% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23939988801 2.80594681477 115% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617328519856 0.56093040696 110% => OK
Word variations: 68.3468157754 60.7387585426 113% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.7857142857 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.1668485571 49.517814964 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.0 127.492653851 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7743622355 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.857142857143 0.814263465372 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 3.99599198397 100% => OK
Readability: 50.110624033 49.1944974215 102% => OK
Elegance: 1.85294117647 1.69124875643 110% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.269562435341 0.332605444948 81% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.109619764044 0.102741220458 107% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0610957132814 0.0668466124924 91% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.589591748724 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.122300344176 0.148594505496 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115851955939 0.134430193775 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0763166106755 0.0742795772207 103% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.373989318137 0.324371583561 115% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.119228691689 0.0638462369009 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205441126016 0.228012699653 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753148375653 0.058150111329 130% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.41683366733 117% => OK
Positive topic words: 6.0 5.90881763527 102% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.