Cycling is healthier and environmentally friendly form of transport. Nevertheless, cycling is getting less popular. What are the reasons of this trend? What can be done to make cycling more popular?
It is widely argued that reasons why people are not into cycling in spite of its benefits. While there is a strong case for this view, solutions must be applied to solve some of the serious problem that has arisen.
There are two reasons why people decide to use other vehicles instead of cycling. One reason is that it may time-consuming in moving from one place to another. For a long period ago, numerous people used to commute by bicycle but the appearance of other vehicles such as car or motorbike decreased bicycle importance strongly. Due to great speed of other vehicles, people did not spend a large of time on commuting. For instance, previously, I spent 20 minutes on going to school but since I had a bike, going to school takes 10 minutes. Hence, people forget bicycles gradually. Another reason is that people have to invest strength in cycling. It purely exact when people use legs in order to start up this vehicle. Meanwhile, other vehicles are no need using more energy in starting motor. Even many objects are not available to use it such as old people or weak people. Hence, cycling is no longer popular for people in the world
Although other vehicles is modern but it make environment worse. Besides that, advantages of cycling are unquestionable based on various reasons. Therefore, people should make cycling more attractive once more time. First of all, governments need to cut down on number of vehicles in several families in order to urge people to use bicycle. When the number of vehicles mitigates, inhabitant compel to use bicycle. As far as I know, China government merely allows inhabitant to have one car in every family so they have to move by bicycle. Thus, China atmosphere is so good that numerous people choose China to go sightseeing in the exceptional holiday. Moreover, individuals should encourage mutually about cycling benefits. Every single person needs to understand about significant mean when they use bicycles. For instance, people wanting to lose weight, they always cycle to consume calories in their body.
In conclusion, only be giving some solutions will reinforce the cycling importance to inhabitants.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99171270718 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6417694833 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563535911602 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 590.4 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3140387123 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5652173913 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7391304348 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142427388355 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471273390788 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0580432215786 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105715640075 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0235509765099 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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