Though we know that smoking causes several catastrophic health issues still many individuals smoke. Smoking causes several health issues. If proper steps are taken, Smoking can be reduced to a large extent.
Smoking in the process of inhaling or exhaling the tobacco through a cigar or pipe. Tobacco consists of a special element called Nicotine that makes people addicted to the habit. Smoking causes various health disturbances starting from Cough, Infection, Pulmonary problems, Oral tumors and general tumors in extreme cases . For Example, In a study conducted by University of Bristol, It is found that patient with smoking habit are 15% more prone to gastric cancers . In addition, It is found that every year almost 10% of lung infections and 60% of oral cancers are during to different nicotine containing substances like cigarette, pipe, jarda, pan etc.
There are several ways to eradicate the smoking habit .Government of India took several measures to stop smoking . Such as, printing on the cigar packets about harmful affects of smoking, Educating large count of people through advertisements. But ,they could not achieve complete success though it reduced to a certain extent. Various ways are still available to help people know about the devastating effects caused cigarettes like movies on their harmful effects. Banning the cigar products which are very harmful along with this, Educating large number of people and provide capping for the age of the customer with a minimum age of 20 years.
To Summarize, Smoking causes several health problems like lung infection and cancers. Hence,adequate measures like educating the people are very essential to control the problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, still, for example, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3984962406 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60260751384 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59022556391 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2291215691 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7333333333 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219239618552 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757814387548 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466815075449 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132917871969 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488052648373 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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