Development is helping people to move to various urban cities.Even though cities are adequately developed,still there are many issues that are to be cleared for proper living in them.Government plays a pivotal role in the growth of the cities.
Population move from rural areas to urban areas for various reasons such as employement,education,settlement as well as lack of proper facilities in the rural areas.However there are many problematic issues in the urban life such as traffic which is more in towns than in villages .Thus,leading to the wastage of time in the travelling.In addition, pollution in cities are more than the rural areas .Hence,they are more prone to diseases such as lung infections.Moreover Cost of living is higher in urban areas so,the person should earn more money to stay in city than in village.
Government should take necessary steps to make the urban life satisfactory to all the migrated population.The steps include road widening and development of various flyovers so that traffic would not be a hectic problem to the people.Along with is adequate plants are to be planted and parks are constructed which reduces the population.one of the major problem in the urban areas in higher rents.ministry should keep capping for excess rents.Developing more industries ,Higher the industries greater the number of employment opportunities thus leading to the improvement of the city.
To summarize,there are many difficulties for settling in city like traffic,environmental pollution and higher rents.Authorities should take care that the people get rid of them and making more and more people comfortable with the urban environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, so, still, thus, well, as for, as to, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1416.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46718146718 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.82353635278 2.80592935109 136% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505791505792 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 447.3 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.506676426 49.4020404114 341% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 354.0 106.682146367 332% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.75 20.7667163134 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 25.0 7.06120827912 354% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270033901518 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163970447871 0.084324248473 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0321992456504 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163970447871 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321992456504 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 36.7 13.0946893788 280% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -1.94 50.2224549098 -4% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.33 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.02 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 9.78957915832 317% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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