deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world, with the serious result for the environment. what do you think can be done to solve this problem?
Humans life is so dependent on the environment, that the abandonment of it, is by no means undeniable. The environment can leave humans, but a human can't live without the environment. Therefore environment protection is more important in recent years. Intercepting deforestation is one of the most important ways to protect the environment.
Deforestation has many effects on our life and planet. Increasing greenhouse gas emissions, acid oceans, loss of species, flooding and erosion, and life quality decrease. Therefore we must stop them for the best quality of life. There are many ways to interrupt the process of deforestation. like: reduce consumptions, reduce paper consumption, and educate others.
Using less, one of the way that can be helpful. It means to reuse and recycling, avoiding the palm oil, opting organic and local product. Recycling the paper product, including printing paper, notebooks, napkins, toilet paper etc. A simple habit try is painting /writing on both sides of the paper, using less toilet paper and avoiding paper plates and napkins.
Agriculture is the leading cause of deforestation. Change the lifestyle that would be the single biggest way to help the planet. The researches indicate, these years, the impact of the wrong way to eat meat, especially beef and pork are serious and high. Increasing the livestock ranching cause to clear the forest.
Teaching people is another factor that can help prevent deforestation. Give information to society like; farmers, that how can have best agronomic, what is the right way of that and etc. Educates the people for the options of recycling the paper and waste separation
In the end, we should think serious and deep, about us and the environment, the problems of that and how we can help it. If we take action these ways, we can have a better life quality.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 150, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...vironment can leave humans, but a human cant live without the environment. Therefore...
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Line 1, column 185, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...uman cant live without the environment. Therefore environment protection is more importan...
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Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...and erosion, and life quality decrease. Therefore we must stop them for the best quality ...
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Line 3, column 293, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Like
...interrupt the process of deforestation. like: reduce consumptions, reduce paper cons...
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Line 9, column 128, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'have the best'.
Suggestion: have the best
... to society like; farmers, that how can have best agronomic, what is the right way of tha...
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Line 9, column 179, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
...gronomic, what is the right way of that and etc. Educates the people for the options of ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17607973422 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86913191924 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568106312292 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5051655403 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.1904761905 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3333333333 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.04761904762 7.06120827912 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162371795971 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0469340465516 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408863698237 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0785404296107 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323044621489 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.17 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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