Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the
world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be
done to solve this problem?
In modern world, the environment have been destroying by human activities, one of the most serious problem affacting badly on the environment is deforestation. In my perspective view, there are two ways that can be applied to reduce the numbers of illegal logging are strengthen forest protection posts around the forest and enhance people’s knowledge about protecting the environment.
First of all, setting up more security posts around forests or hills, the forest is no longer facilitate access so it can help to reduce a significant amount of loggers access to the forest, on the other hand, It is important to checking goods on the truck or container that travel along the city or town or from province to province especially in the forested areas in other to detect and intercept illegal wood trade, this will lead to inhibit logging.
Second, It is extremely important to enhance people’s awareness about protecting natural environment especially forest. This is the first step but it’s really important. Schools could add lessons about how important the forest is for the survival of all creatures on earth, besides, we could also educate students how to protect the forest such as: plant trees, logging legally and instruct them how to report if they detect anyone with illegal logging. Furthermore, schools should regularly organize afforestation campaign in other to raise student’s awareness about how important forest is. Parents can also be a good teacher to inspire their kids the love with Mother Nature.
It cannot be denied that deforestation is one of the most important issues that need to be solved in today’s world. Protecting the forest is not only the responsibility of a country or a human but the whole world, and everyone all responsible for it. Protecting the environment in general and forest in particular will be the on-going problem and will affect directly to our future generation so it should be the on top problem in every country.
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- Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world with serious results for the environment What do you think can be done to solve this problem 89
- Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world with serious results for the environment What do you think can be done to solve this problem 73
- Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world with serious results for the environment What do you think can be done to solve this problem 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 269, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'strengthened'.
Suggestion: strengthened
...duce the numbers of illegal logging are strengthen forest protection posts around the fore...
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Line 1, column 342, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s around the forest and enhance people’s knowledge about protecting the environme...
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Line 3, column 230, Rule ID: IT_IS_JJ_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'check'?
Suggestion: check
..., on the other hand, It is important to checking goods on the truck or container that tr...
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Line 7, column 327, Rule ID: ON-GOING[1]
Message: Did you mean 'ongoing'?
Suggestion: ongoing
...al and forest in particular will be the on-going problem and will affect directly to our...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, really, second, so, then, in general, in particular, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14197530864 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8168581494 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 106.787887387 49.4020404114 216% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 151.454545455 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4545454545 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.4545454545 7.06120827912 176% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161236043996 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745411608934 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556306115271 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109257015516 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0663681360963 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.