Deforestation is happening in many parts of the world. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve this issue?
It cannot be denied that in our burgeoning world chopping down trees have become more vital issues all around the world than used to be. This essay will examine the main precursors of deforestation and viable measurements for this.
The first major cause is to create spaces for industries, especially construction. This is a worrying trend, since it results in disappearing endangered species alongside with deleteriously effects humans health as well. As trees are the main source of oxygen that is why if we continue chopping down trees we will shorten our own lives. Besides, living animals and floras in a forest are supported basic food chain, but if the basic food chain is collapsed then many species may be exposed to extinction and will be bloke down. In order to solve this problem, felling trees should be restricted and opportunities for constructions should be far away from forests.
Another undeniable precursor is that trees are felled illegally in most forests. By this I mean all around the world people who live in forested areas cut down trees in order to earn money. Hence, it leads to increasing high demand on wood from lots of enterprises. To tackle this, the government should establish a company which is responsible for the security of forests and set up excessive punishments to each felled tree.
In conclusion, deforestation is caused by human activities in many parts of the world by growing numbers of constructions and poor quality of the security system which leads to a global problem. Actions must be taken urgently, otherwise, our societies will face even greater problems in the near future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, hence, if, may, so, then, well, i mean, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05166051661 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80351995397 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619926199262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0738926533 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.307692308 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242486267674 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766130801195 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636083786098 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150848582115 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643359549891 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.11 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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