Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Tailback congestion and accidents become more common in our burgeoning world than used to be. Hence, some individuals hold the view that in order to decrease traffic accidents, penalties are strengthened for driving offenses. However, others are of the opinion that to improve road safety other methods are more productive. In this essay I will analyse both views and give my own opinion.
On the one hand, high taxes on driving faults are beneficial both to the government and drivers. By this I mean, if drivers break the traffic rules, they will pay excessively high taxes which are useful for governments’ budgets. As a result, drivers may drive slowly and cautiously in order to avoid taxes. In Japan, for instance, the maximum speed on normal roads is about 55 or 60 km per hour which means low risk of accidents. However, despite these advantages individuals may resent these heavy fines.
On the other hand, improving the quality of public transports and enlarging roads are more effective ways to decrease accident levels. In other words, if the convenience and charges of public transportation suit individuals they will commute to their workplaces by them instead of cars. Besides, they may save their precious time instead of waiting in traffic congestions. The second way is to enlarge roads which help drivers to move more freely. Besides, it also reduces huge traffic jams in rush hours.
In conclusion, although improving taxes gives lots of benefits, improving public transportation is the most effective way to reduce accidents. I think if the government wants to reduce accidents, they need to pay attention not only to taxes but also the quality of transport which people use daily.
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Suggestion:
...educes huge traffic jams in rush hours. In conclusion, although improving taxes ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, if, may, second, so, then, for instance, i mean, i think, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12142857143 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73748543934 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.5156211267 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.625 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6875 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300309938493 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0934760935735 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724047816589 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180509653768 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102603896021 0.056905535591 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.12 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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