The demand for food is increasing worldwide. What are the causes? What measures could the international community take in order to improve the situation?（
Several countries are suffering famine and poverty in today’s society. Certain citizens in those countries are living in hunger and going through their daily lives without getting proper meals, which leads to the increase in food’s demand worldwide. In this essay, I will elaborate the causes, and propose several effective measures to tackle this global issue.
To commence with, numerous aspects are apparently the main cause for this issue. Firstly, the status of poverty has remained for quite a long time. Countries in Africa or the Middle-East have suffered famine due to the lack of modern applications. These countries have negligible equipment for constructing facilities such as factories in order to produce enough cuisines for inhabitants. Moreover, due to the harsh environment of high temperature around the year, it is nearly impossible to cultivate crops on these lands along with the lack of rainfall, which leads to soil erosion. In addition, a large amount of food is dumped annually. Residents in developed countries do not grasp the importance of food and resources. Consequently, they often leave a considerable proportion of meat and vegetables after finishing their meals because they assume these are basic demands for a person’s life. For example, around 40% of leftovers has been wasted over the past decade, yet people do not perceive that this amount of cuisine can be used to feed a whole community in Africa.
International communities can consider various solutions to deal with this problem. Developed countries may be demanded to provide supplies for other agrarians. Governments should consider transporting necessary materials to these lands to set up modern facilities that can play an important role in producing food. Furthermore, it is advisable to propose a fixed penalty for leaving food in restaurants. For instance, people can acknowledge that they must pay an additional fee if they have a certain amount of leftovers after their meals. Therefore, the intense issue of dumping food into the garbage will soon be clarified in the near future.
In conclusion, although a large quantity of food has been provided over the past century, many people are still in need of this resource nowadays. Thus, governments should take into account various measures, which will make poverty diminish from an advanced society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1999.0 1615.20841683 124% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35924932976 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82054607583 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.592493297587 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 621.0 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0070232223 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.95 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.65 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159896318902 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464888479176 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0291087422922 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0886916578402 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032371066624 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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