The demand for fresh water is increasing day by day that has become global problem what are the causes and solutions for this?
this is a fact scarcity of natural resources is being increasing at world level. population has been increasing day by day which leads the demand for fresh water. there are several reasons that why demand for ground water is escalating at higher rate and number of measures could be taken to curb this issue. On the one hand, rising demand for water has several causes which I am going to discuss. Firstly, the growing population is primary reason to pump up fresh water as this is a basic need of all living things and no one can survive without water, and everybody needs water for household activities. Secondly, Technical advancements are taking place day by day as most of the innovations are based on electricity that raises the need for more production of electricity. As a consequent, freshwater is the main element that is required for producing electricity such as big Dams hold huge amount of water to generate energy in the electric power plants. that is why the level of underground water is going down with the passage of time. Finally, cultivation of crops is an important cause as irrigation of crops is done by freshwater for their healthy growth. Hence, ground water is pumped with the help of engines. On the other hand, along with the causes of rising demand of water, there are some solutions that can help in saving fresh water sources. First, water is renewable natural resource and can be used for other purposes after renewing. To be more specific rainwater can be used for irrigation then there would be no need to use ground water. Besides this, For the development of country launching innovations is significant; however, today there is great need for protecting natural resources. so, the use of freshwater should be decreased for upcoming generations otherwise they would be deprived from a natural resources like water, soil, trees, coal and many more. Apart from this, if there will be awareness among people regarding saving water, then people would collaborate to save water resources such as oceans, rivers, and ponds and the most important one is ground water. To conclude, although there are some causes of high demand for freshwater, yet I believe by creating awareness among people and collaboration of government and public can save water for next generations.
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| 2021-06-18 | lakhveer khokhar | 56 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, apart from, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 13.1623246493 236% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1915.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.94832041344 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65158838276 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.503875968992 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 608.4 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1648593103 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.647058824 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7647058824 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.70588235294 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387574510568 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.14317593793 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0997304806657 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.387574510568 0.151304729494 256% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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