Describe a memorable event of your life.
When it springs to an unforgettable memory of my soul, my graduation day instantaneously comes to mind. To this day, I still reminisce vividly that it was taken place on a sunny day of May 26th, 2021. The major auditorium, the place for significant activities at my high school, represented the venue of the commencement ceremony.
After the principal finished his address at the commencement, it was my chance to speak on behalf of more than 300 students about the amazing experiences I had throughout the previous three years. I was a little apprehensive before I spoke, on the contrary, everyone in the room was impressed by my genuineness and deep-down emotions, and I earned a standing ovation. I was so nervous about coming across the platform in front of consequently a plethora of people that I chewed my fingernails while I waited in line behind the stage.
The moment I arrived on stage, though, pride took the place of my trepidation. My three years of studying hard had finally paid off, and I couldn't help but feel proud of myself. To commemorate that crucial event in my life, we later got a competent photographer to take an abundance of photos of myself and my pals.
My graduation day is one of my most treasured memories since it signaled the change from school life to a new environment- university life. To start a new chapter in my life, I immediately left the safety and warmth of the school. I always feel the flashes of that day coming back to me whenever I look at the pictures.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 139, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...udying hard had finally paid off, and I couldnt help but feel proud of myself. To comme...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, finally, if, look, may, so, still, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1244.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67669172932 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95522439676 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.601503759398 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3649518386 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.666666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0613962534961 0.244688304435 25% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025252385861 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0446044296136 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0420272267544 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0432822097564 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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