Describe a piece of equipment: laptop computer
In our life, we are in a digital age and many modern equipment invented for human’s life. There are many modern equipment invented for human’s life such as mobile phone, camera, smart television, etc and laptop computer is one of them. To say about its advantages, laptop is used not only for work but also for entertainment.
First of all, we need to know what laptop is and what use is for. Laptop computer is a kind of computer which is less heavy than traditional ones, without plugging in power when using and especially easy for bringing. Therefore bussiness man usually prefer it for office processing such as Word, Excel, Powerpoint. In engineer branch, laptop is dispensible to engineering, architectuer and designer, because almost important and useful programmes are written in it. Besides, new modern laptops with strong configurations, detail screens is one of good choices for entertainment. For example, professional gamers have used a laptop for playing games which request high requires about battery, chip, VGA, screen and RAM recently.
Secondly, how to use it correctly is a notice answer. Each of manufactured branches own their laptop styles, but all of them always have one start-up button to turn it on. After that, what you do next is depend on your purpose, but I’m going to about connecting to the Internet. Commonly, there is a wifi signal icon at the right bottom corner of laptop, you need to click it for connecting to a wireless network. If that’s the first time, it usually ask you a password to be accepted and remember your IP to connect automatically next time. This could take you minutes until the notice on the screen telling you that you are now online – you know, connected to thhe Internet. Finally, choosing a browser, typing a website name you want and clicking on Enter key – you accessed.
To conclusion, laptop computer is a great invention of human especially 4.0 era. It is applied in the number of branches consisting of medicine, engineer, technology, etc. Although it gets a huge number advantages, we also need to notice to its disadvantages to limit bad effects from it
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun equipment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much modern equipment', 'a good deal of modern equipment'.
Suggestion: much modern equipment; a good deal of modern equipment
...n our life, we are in a digital age and many modern equipment invented for human's life. There a...
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Line 1, column 106, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun equipment seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much modern equipment', 'a good deal of modern equipment'.
Suggestion: much modern equipment; a good deal of modern equipment
...vented for human's life. There are many modern equipment invented for human's life such as ...
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Line 2, column 219, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...using and especially easy for bringing. Therefore bussiness man usually prefer it for off...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... it on. After that, what you do next is depend on your purpose, but I'm going to ...
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Line 3, column 463, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'asks'?
Suggestion: asks
... that's the first time, it usually ask you a password to be accepted and remem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, kind of, such as, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96398891967 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84881196668 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 216.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598337950139 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 565.2 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.6427996589 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.3157894737 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137130425612 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0484527986837 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581498507668 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0895545790647 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0398446053009 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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