despite the best efforts of crime fighting organisations crime will never be eradicated from civilised society to what extent do you agree with this view
A common belief is that the existence of crime can never be eradicated from a co-operative society,inspite of the optimal efforts taken by the crime-fighting associations. I completely disagree with this ideology as there are a plethora of other factors to be addressed in order to maintain a crime free society.
A crime fighting organisation has not been to achieve the goal of eradicating crime for many reasons. Firstly, the organisation only focuses on the felony that a person commits and fails to find the motive of the crime. A case to point is that getting punishment for the person who commits the crime will not cease it from happening again, if the policing squad identifies the root cause of the issue, they can demolish the crime chain completely and prevent it from happening from then.In addition to this, crime fighting team can clearly get a picture of what causes people to perform felonies. Addressing their needs will definitely alleviate the existing crime rates.
Being a civilised society, the people could educated about the crimes so as to prevent it from happening.Once the people are aware about the different crimes being committed in their neighbourhood , they can take precautionary actions themselves. The awareness could be brought in the form of banners, advertisements and during social gatherings. Moreover, a crime alert mechanism such as emergency number, query police buttons can be installed across the city where the victim can raise their problem immediately and avoid the crime itself from happening.For instance, a pepper spray could be given to every citizen which will automatically trigger an alert to police when used.
To summarize, the crime-fighting squad can cogently cease the crime from happening with the help of a civilised society. This is possible because a co-operative community will inform the crime even before it takes place and the police squad will prevent it from happening. Eventually, the organisation will identify the root cause and destroy the crime chain completely.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, as to, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1720.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25993883792 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97340982252 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544342507645 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 552.6 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 10.0 2.52805611222 396% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.6983932033 49.4020404114 190% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.333333333 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.16666666667 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391048745034 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.167408794812 0.084324248473 199% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069994424982 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269636038758 0.151304729494 178% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545311368155 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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