• Nowadays more young people leave home at an early age to either study or work in another city.
The education and culture of the people have changed a lot over the years. The changes are more reflected on the younger generation who are the building blocks of the future. Recently, there has been a trend that young people leave home at an early age for studies or work.
This opens up a lot of opportunity in front of them from which they can choose. This gives a new boost to their learning career. They became more capable of doing things of their own. From the walls of the home booming under the pampering of their parents, they are all set for a new phase of their life where they have to be on their own. This gives them to look at their life in a much more serious perspective. Even though they might have some struggles in the initial phase slowly they start picking up and live their life.
On the other hand, many often the young minds are not able to distinguish between what is good and wrong for them. Too much freedom at a very young age can also adversely affect them instead of doing good. Some of them end in doing illegal activities and by then spoiling their life and the hopes of their families.
Like a coin has both sides, every change or process will have its own advantages and disadvantages. But it’s we who should decide upon which side we should be.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 20.9802955665 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 31.9359605911 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.75862068966 35% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40167364017 5.00649968141 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.1720922239 2.71678728327 80% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 139.433497537 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585774058577 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 379.143842365 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.5024630542 83% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.1414473318 50.4703680194 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.1428571429 104.977214359 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0714285714 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 7.25397266985 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167407905347 0.242375264174 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665139539615 0.0925447433944 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133020746701 0.071462118173 186% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121923580223 0.151781067708 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146027146031 0.0609392437508 240% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 12.6369458128 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.1260098522 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.9458128079 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.94 11.5310837438 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.32886699507 84% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 55.0591133005 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.3980295567 85% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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