Despite the best efforts of crime fighting organisations crime will never be eradicated from civilised society.
To what extent do you agree with this view?
Nowadays there is an increment in crime rates throughout the world many countries are looking for strategies to eradicate crime from the society despite the many efforts of crime fighting organisations, crime can never be eradicated from the society.This essay will discuss the measures used by different countries to eradicate crime and why crime will never be eradicated from the society.
To begin with,many rules are implemented by the government to reduce the rate of crime in a country.This rules have helps to reduce crime some offenders are punished severely hence this has reduced crime to a certain extent.Government has install CCTV cameras in places like banks and other business organisations which reduce robbery cases as people are through the devices.Police officers have been increased in different parts of the country so if a certain crime is performed the guilty can be caught easily. For example in my hometown at the entrance there is a police station so any crime whether small or big committed it can be complained easily.
On the other hand,poverty is a major cause of crime.In addition unemployment also helps in that people with no money and food cannot provide for the family and so to fulfill their needs they commit crime to get money.Government should take measures to alleviate poverty by creating new job opportunities so the poor people earn a living and can stop the crime activities.Unless this is done,from cannot be eradicated. For example,Kerala Police authority carried out a survey and found out that 70% of robbery done is by the poor people.
In conclusion,government should take certain measures to alleviate poverty is a crime can be reduced and without that there is no other way to eradicate crime.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, look, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13636363636 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15145157416 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541958041958 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 155.248904093 49.4020404114 314% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 244.833333333 106.682146367 229% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.6666666667 20.7667163134 230% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.6666666667 7.06120827912 236% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341316936687 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159824373531 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132639540112 0.0667982634062 199% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217945325848 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123181671782 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.6 13.0946893788 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.31 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.42 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.78 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.0 9.78957915832 306% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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