Crime has been a part of human life since the beginning of society and we have employed several measures to counter it. Regardless, crime is still a big part of civilised society. Some argue that crime will never be fully eradicated from civilised society. I agree with this statement to and extend and in this essay i will give few reasons why crime cannot be fully terminated from out society.
One of the major reasons for crime is the lack of employment and resources. People who are in need of some quick money to full fill their needs seems to take risk and commit crimes. For example young individuals who were caught committing crimes tend to agree that the main reason for committing the crime is because of their poor condition and circumstance. Another reason is that some people are by nature love to commit crimes and full fill their needs regardless of the way they take, even if it is through committing severe crimes. It is almost impossible to know these people's intention before they commit or involve in catastrophic crime.
Some may argue that employing alternative methods to stop crimes as opposed to traditional methods may help. This is true to an extend, For example in countries like Netherlands they are taking measures to stop people from committing crimes by shutting down prison and employing alternative methods like community services and electronic badges. This seems to have an effect on people who commit less severe crimes like shoplifting and so on. But for major severe crimes it is may impossible to go this way.
In conclusion, crime is up to each individuals in a society and personally i believe crime cannot be fully eradicated from our society in the near future with the systems and laws in place.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, so, still, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57034368649 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1879290618 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.285714286 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64285714286 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248533743309 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106155432715 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786593228368 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181335051422 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0800512487386 0.056905535591 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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