smoking is an expensive habit not only does it cost a lot of money but it's also harmful to your health. Nevertheless, there are still about 1.3 billion people in the world who smoke. it is also a sad fact that one in five teenagers take up the habit when they are as young as 13-15. Ofcouse, there is one group that have some benefits from tobacco, it is tobacco industry, since it's profits depend on our addiction to cigarettes.
first of all, smoking in crease the risk of cancer, damages the pregnant,child, old people and also people who smoke. smoking extremely dangerous and unhealthy for surrounding people who breathe the cigarette smoke. children especially teenagers are often curious . they witness their parent, grandparents or teachers use cigarette and then they want to try it. besides , many teenagers think that smoking is a sign that they are grown up and feel cool about themselves. when smoke for a long time , they will be addicted and absolutely depend on cigarette to reduce stress
so in order to decrease smoking in students. not only principals and teachers in school, but also have parents notice them. when i found out that they use cigarette , students are punished . on the other hand , retail stores do not sell tobacco to young people. Tobacco companies also need to print on the packaging that cigarettes are not for children under 18.
In summary, smoking very harmful for health and there are need for strict measures to punish young people who use tobacco to overcome childhood tobacco addiction and also reduce smoking rate and death by tobacco a in the worlds
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ool, but also have parents notice them. when i found out that they use cigarette , s...
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...tudents are punished . on the other hand , retail stores do not sell tobacco to yo...
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...arettes are not for children under 18. In summary, smoking very harmful for hea...
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...reduce smoking rate and death by tobacco a in the worlds
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...duce smoking rate and death by tobacco a in the worlds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, nevertheless, so, still, then, in summary, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84981684982 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53055225416 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1380213836 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127313693002 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476856696428 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582300863936 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815052152365 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414273171807 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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smoking is an expensive habit not only d...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Smoking
smoking is an expensive habit not only does it ...
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... billion people in the world who smoke. it is also a sad fact that one in five tee...
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...depend on our addiction to cigarettes. first of all, smoking in crease the risk...
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Suggestion: First
...tion to cigarettes. first of all, smoking in crease the risk of c...
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Line 2, column 92, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...the risk of cancer, damages the pregnant,child, old people and also people who smoke...
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...k of cancer, damages the pregnant,child, old people and also people who smoke. s...
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... old people and also people who smoke. smoking extremely dangerous and unhealthy for s...
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...n especially teenagers are often curious . they witness their parent, grandparents...
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...specially teenagers are often curious . they witness their parent, grandparents or t...
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Suggestion: ,
...te and then they want to try it. besides , many teenagers think that smoking is a ...
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Line 2, column 456, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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...at smoking is a sign that they are grown up and feel cool about themselves. when ...
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...own up and feel cool about themselves. when smoke for a long time , they will be ad...
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Suggestion: ,
...t themselves. when smoke for a long time , they will be addicted and absolutely de...
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...y depend on cigarette to reduce stress so in order to decrease smoking in stude...
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... order to decrease smoking in students. not only principals and teachers in school,...
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...ool, but also have parents notice them. when i found out that they use cigarette , s...
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Suggestion: I
...but also have parents notice them. when i found out that they use cigarette , stu...
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Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: ,
...when i found out that they use cigarette , students are punished . on the other ha...
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...ey use cigarette , students are punished . on the other hand , retail stores do no...
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Suggestion: On
...use cigarette , students are punished . on the other hand , retail stores do not s...
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Suggestion: ,
...tudents are punished . on the other hand , retail stores do not sell tobacco to yo...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...arettes are not for children under 18. In summary, smoking very harmful for hea...
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Line 4, column 225, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...reduce smoking rate and death by tobacco a in the worlds
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Line 4, column 227, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...duce smoking rate and death by tobacco a in the worlds
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, nevertheless, so, still, then, in summary, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84981684982 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53055225416 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56043956044 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 411.3 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1380213836 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127313693002 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476856696428 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582300863936 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0815052152365 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414273171807 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.13 8.58950901804 83% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.