Despite improvements in vehicle technology, there are still large numbers of road accidents. Explain some of the causes of these accidents, and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem.
It is no doubt that more and more new vehicle technology innovations have been come into being. However, a large numbers of road accidents are being happened day-to-day. In my opinion, there are many reason that causes these accident and some measures should be taken.
There are some main factors causing road accidents. The main cause is the narrow awareness of road users. Many people in traffic do not wear helmet and comply with traffic laws, which can lead to awful consequences. According to researchers, there are 35% accidents on the roadway being caused by bad behavior such as drinking alcohol or using mobile phone while they were driving. Secondly, the qualities of public transport construction are being downgraded. In fact, Vietnam’s government have not upgrade or expand railway system for over a century so many unfortunate railway accidents have happened. Last but not least, traffic laws are not strict enough to deter violators. The penalty clauses of the law are too gent to make people not repeat an offence.
To solve this problems, I will suggest some measures. First of all, government should raise the awareness of people by propagating on the mass media and at schools. In addition, government should open classes to help people know negative impacts of unsafe driving. Moreover, they also should enact finer laws to deter commuters from offending traffic laws. Finally, government have to plan for a traffic system with the farther view.
To sum up, road accidents result from several causes. Therefore, it is high time we needed take some measures to against these issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 196, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun reason seems to be countable; consider using: 'many reasons'.
Suggestion: many reasons
...ed day-to-day. In my opinion, there are many reason that causes these accident and some mea...
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Line 1, column 220, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this accident' or 'these accidents'?
Suggestion: this accident; these accidents
...nion, there are many reason that causes these accident and some measures should be taken. T...
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Line 5, column 10, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ople not repeat an offence. To solve this problems, I will suggest some measures....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in addition, in fact, no doubt, such as, first of all, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15589353612 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59879186386 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6463878327 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3264644237 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.3333333333 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6111111111 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20681500254 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0681145802923 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0936067620603 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128446303583 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684076456086 0.056905535591 120% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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