It is been observed that technology is evolving rapidly to ease human life, vehicles are not the exception. In spite of tremendous advancements in motor science, it is inevitable how the numbers of accidents also increase. In this essay, I will spot the key factors for the immerging issue and provide the solutions accordingly.
To embark upon, automobile companies introducing new changes on yearly bases, like google map, USB support for music, automatic gears and many more. Hence, the dashboards of vehicles are now embedded with complicated systems and could be a cause for distraction while driving. Although a mean of transport could come with any top speed feature, most of the roads in metro cities have a large number of pits and holes, consequently, it is difficult to maintain speed on such road conditions. In a piece of recent news by "The Times", even an automobile may have the numbers of features, but the major factor for a fatal accident is ignorance of traffic rules, some times drink and driving.
In contrast, there are many ways to control these detrimental situations. Firstly, automobile companies should prevent support for the hands-free mobile call or messaging facilities while driving. For instance, sometimes a heavy conversation phone may lead to an accidental case. Secondly, the government should focus on the improvement of the roads to poor conditions. In an empirical survey of Oxford University ascertained that about forty-six percent of mishaps are caused by the rash driving on roads. This consequently indicates that there is a need for stringent implementation of traffic rules, traffic police can put huge fine or punishments on roads.
To conclude, the development of the automobile industry is for the convenience of humans, however, they are sole responcible for the betterment of the civilized society by following rules and do sensible driving.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 385, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
... most of the roads in metro cities have a large number of pits and holes, consequently, it is dif...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for instance, in contrast, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30921052632 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99450529814 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.628289473684 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 512.1 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3696833058 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.285714286 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4285714286 7.06120827912 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109184196314 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341667617543 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038061188675 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0528877430994 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0480919762459 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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