Despite improvements in vehicle technology,there are still large numbers of road accidents.Explain some of the cause of these accidents,and suggest some measures that could be taken to address the problem.
Environment play a vital role in human life. In the modern world all dwellers used the vehicle technology because it they are hectic schedule in their life.Then, they are umplethora citizen use the transport system in our life. There are umpteen reason behind it .I will discuss my point of view in upcoming paragraph.
It is often argued that nuclear arsenals keep the world safe and the nuclear energy is an inexpensive environmentally and freindly source of power. Afterthat, that these benefits outweigh the drawbacks because the downsides and the eradication of mankind are the destruction of the planet.Then,believing that major powers having roads accidents nuclear warheads pointed at one another is a good thing because it ensures super powers will not go to war is foolish. Therefore, this is because it only takes one mistake or a rogue commander to trigger a nuclear conflict and this is a conflict most of us would will survive. For instance, during the cuban missile crisis the united states and the URRS came extremely close to launching their missiles and this demomstrates that they are not actually the ulitmate reterrent and nuclear war is possible.
Nevertheless, all people used the technology vehical like bicycle,active,car, bus and truck etc. There are upsurge the pollution day by day. Furthermore, there are plethore accident in the road. The idea that nuclear fission is a clean source of energy has been dispelled by numerous high profile accidents at nuclear power plants. Moreover, these disasters show just how harmful and long lasting a leak and nuclear material can be and the contamination is not worth it when other source of energy are available.For instance, the fukushima disaster has polluted huge part of the pacific ocean and it can be california have dangerous levels of radiaster. Then, to make matters worse, solar and wild energy could replace nuclear energy tomorrow if there was the political will to do so.
In summarise, after analysing that issue reckon, in opinion vehicle technology are beneficial rathen than detrimental affect because it consequences of using nuclear energy are catastrophic to both our species and the earth itself.
- The graph below compares figures for production and consumption of energy in the US from 1950 to 2000.It also predicts the figures of 2050. 61
- The pie charts below show the online shopping sales for retail sectors in new zealand in 2003 and 2013.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 61
- In some countries it is illegal employers to reject job appications on the basis of age criteria .it a positive or negative development. 61
- A government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 56
- Do you think card less society is realistic and why? what are the advantages and disadvantages 75
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1843.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20621468927 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9345442579 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593220338983 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 88.203845536 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.642857143 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2857142857 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.040463229699 0.244688304435 17% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0135872288102 0.084324248473 16% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0178153061452 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.023679847708 0.151304729494 16% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0120783422654 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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