Despite spending several years in Yekaterinburg, he could not speak a word of Russian. Some cultures value old age while others value young age. Discuss both attitudes and express your opinion.
Opinions on the merits and drawbacks of aging is varying from one culture to another. Some see old age as a sign of wisdom and young age sign of naivety. However, others view young age as a period of human vibrancy and old age as a period marked by redundancy. Both viewpoints will be examined in this essay.
On the one side, many feel that the contributions old people make to society are more valuable than those made by their younger counterparts. The fact that most world leaders are old people play as a good example here. The elderly, having experienced more, tends to hold a deeper understand of the problems of the world and are thus capable of sharing much more effective advice. Thus through this lens, it is understandable why age is revered in many cultures.
On the other side, many counter that youth carries with it a viciousness and energy that old age simply cannot match. Although fictional, the main characters from the movie. The GodFather clearly demonstrates the various drawbacks that come along with aging. Towards the end of the movie, Marlon Brando's godfather begins to having trouble making rational and timely decisions due to his increasing age. Because of this, his son, played by Al Pacino, is required to take over as head of the family. This scene illustrates a truth that is universally constant with old age comes increasing dependence. It is for this reason that many cultures prize the energy and dynamism that comes with youth.
Although the above discussion demonstrates that there are benefits to both being old and young, it is argued that neither age can be said to be better than the other. It is assumed that worldwide culturally sensitive beliefs regarding age will not be altered into the foreseeable future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 18, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun feel seems to be countable; consider using: 'many feels'.
Suggestion: many feels
...amined in this essay. On the one side, many feel that the contributions old people make ...
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Line 2, column 380, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
... of sharing much more effective advice. Thus through this lens, it is understandable...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, regarding, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8438538206 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60313366873 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9218519766 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7647058824 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94117647059 7.06120827912 27% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222029373497 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0704964548962 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0660424104782 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143335966834 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0880392277642 0.056905535591 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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