In the developed world average life expectancy is increasing What problems will this cause for individuals and society Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations
With the advent of technology and industrialization, a dramatic upliftment with improved social security has led to the well-being and increased life expectancy in the developed nations, resulting in a higher proportion of aged people. Although this is a positive change, however, the adverse bearings associated with it to society and its people can not be overlooked. This essay would endeavor to shed some light on different measures that are required to be followed in order to grapple with the impacts of this emerging scenario.
To begin with, one of the major problems is the increased burden on the healthcare system. Especially during the unprecedented times, the same becomes so overwhelming and challenging to safeguard the senior people. For instance, amid the Covid-19 pandemic, the countries with aged people got badly targeted leading to a higher fatality rate. Besides this, in order to accommodate seniors in jobs for their livelihood, youngsters mostly struggle to enter into the workforce system which further results in an increased rate of unemployment.
Furthermore, despite these emerging issues, a country can put serious efforts to curb its long-term effects on society. One such measure includes lowering the retirement age to provide an equal opportunity to the young generation for further economic growth. In addition, facilitating the seniors with all the basic health, pension, and technical services can help to mitigate the problem to a greater extent. For example, old people should have access to all the intuitive mobile apps, cutting-edge technologies, and improved dental facilities to reduce the burden on the internal economy.
To conclude, even though an increase in life expectancy is a sign of a burgeoning economy, proper planning to run the same is highly synonymous with a balanced social and economic structure.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'safeguarding'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'challenge' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: safeguarding
...becomes so overwhelming and challenging to safeguard the senior people. For instance, amid t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, however, if, look, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.46206896552 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01124329919 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624137931034 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9878898577 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.0 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1666666667 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206489155337 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0675270800844 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463405258586 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114172632721 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582599906364 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.68 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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