It is often said that there is a significant increase in the average life span of humans. This essay will point out some problems of this trend and suggest solutions to mitigate them.
There are several reasons why the growth of average life expectancy causes many issues for individuals and society. Firstly, the aging population puts a heavy burden on the healthcare system. For instan\ce, during the COVID-19 pandemic, governments had to spend huge money from national subsidies to treat countless people who have community spread. Secondly, there are more elderly people of retirement age who are eligible to receive a pension from the national budget. Consequently, some nations are not able to afford to pay for social welfare.
However, some solutions could tackle the problems that are mentioned above. Firstly, money from national subsidies should be taken from other sectors to spend on vital healthcare facilities. Therefore, it would meet the growing demands of health-conscious nations while the rising numbers of the old citizens. Secondly, it is important for governments to increase the retirement age for working adults, perhaps 65 or 70 years old. If people work longer, they would pay more taxes and reduce the cost of pensions.
In conclusion, there are numerous measures to tackle the problems which certainly arise as the populations of countries grow older.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1166.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 220.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74583079902 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627272727273 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 362.7 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.5388232431 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.6923076923 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290885262744 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0892686456215 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0620926345608 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159669519357 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0525899996287 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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