Learning how to distinguish right from wrong is of great importance for children. I concur with the idea that adults should teach kids this distinction by punishment. But I think only mild punishments are allowed to implement.
punishment is a good way that help children to realize their misbehavior. for example, when students steal stationery from their peers, if teachers or parents do not penalize them, they would not realize their mistake and continue doing it again. By contrast, if punishment like criticizing students at school can make them embarrassing. therefore, they may stop stealing again. as a result, penalizing children for bad behavior could assist in training them to be good citizens.
however, I argue that merely mild punishments are implemented when children make mistakes because of some reason. to begin with, children are rebellious and sensitive. if adults corporal punishment like hitting they would tend to be against. moreover, it would affect strongly mental health. instead of this, parents and teachers should penalties kids by doing housework and reducing pocket money and then educate them on why they are being punished. these measures are likely to have efficacy in helping children distinguish between right and wrong.
in conclusion, I believe that teaching children distinguish right from wrong is immensely crucial in order to help them become good citizens. adults should implement some mild punishments to educate children better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1250.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 230.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4347826087 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76435589533 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613043478261 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.1935394256 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.125 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.375 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301052676238 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952113427182 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532282428036 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196851452319 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0505670578332 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.62 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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