With the development of technology, children are now living in a world that is completely
different from what it was even 10 years ago.
What are the advantages and disadvantages?
The advancement in the technology has led the children to live in a virtual utopia that is least similar to the real world. In my opinion, as compared to the situation that was before 10 years, enhancements in the technologies has changed excessive things. The development in the field of science has provided not only pros, but also some cons.
Due to the fact that, science and technology fields are providing prolific benefits, there might be disadvantages that might hinder the growth of children. For instance, previously, schools were not providing calculators for the children. The reason behind this was simple that, it might hinder the numerical ability of the pupil. On the contrary, students are learning to use calculators at an early age nowadays. Hence, this might limit the logical, numerical and critical thinking abilities. Moreover, the research has been done that the addiction of mobile phones in the teens nowadays have mitigated their social relationships. Thus, teenagers might face mental health issues because of this.
On the other hand, technology has also gifted fruitful opportunities for the students in the field of medical and robotics field. For example, the cancer treatment which was a question before, has been resolved. Likewise, the enhancements in the field of robotics and artificial intelligence can have varied advantages. For instance, the help that was provided manually earlier in some mobile applications via customer care, has been replaced by artificial intelligence. While, robots today are ubiquitous where, the human involvement might create problems. There might be some fields those are not taught in some countries. Therefore, children are also educating themselves in such fields in which they are despite the long distance from the internet.
Overall, technology and science might have cleared the path for plethora of enhancements. However, it has also opened the door for the children to dwell in the virtual world. In my view, it might be crucial to limit the utilization of technology although, it has tremendous benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, likewise, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, in my view, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35866261398 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86677223592 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547112462006 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.0554985169 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.15 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.45 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.65 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122344424671 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377145111929 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040288157264 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903752737674 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508618129625 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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