Because of the general increase in tourism and more people travelling, there has been
an increase in the number of flight globally. What impacts of this phenomenon on the
environment ? What measures could be taken to solve this problem?
The surging level in the tourism field and an increased amount of people travelling has led to the gradual growth of the air transportation. In my opinion, due to globalization, this escalation might be beneficial. However, it may also have a number of consequences which may hinder the environment and biodiversity.
It is evident that, globalization has soared and opened the doors for new opportunities for the countries that may lack some fields. For instance, there are students who want to pursue education in the field of robotics and automation. Since, the country they are born in, might not provide any education and opportunities in this field. Thus, these students fly to the countries which may provide prolific opportunities to them. However, this escalation might increase the environmental problems such as air traffic or pollution.
On the other hand, the less attention is paid on such problems because the number of benefits achieved are more. Although the air and noise pollution level is surging, there are certain measures that can be taken to avoid it. For example, by increasing the plantation of the trees, pollution can be controlled. Moreover, traffic in the air has led to extinction of some species of the birds. The harmful gases and rays emitted from the flights may harm the birds. Such effects can be handled at some extent. For instance, the level of emission of the gases and rays or the frequency of the planes can be limited.
Thus, the developments in the tourism industries has led to many environmental problems and consequently, affected the biodiversity. In my view, these impacts of phenomenon can be controlled by taking precautionary measures before flicking the effects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, however, if, may, moreover, so, thus, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1446.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16428571429 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0459993836 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.1008549863 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.0588235294 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4705882353 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22728203217 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648289267261 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512699462493 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132673069219 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422814478022 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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