This modern era is fully driven by technology and It's outcome. People are becoming more conscious towards the technology and there uses.And some people argue that the development of technology resulted various problems in the environment.But,Personally what I think is that If we have appropriate knowledge of technology ,It does not harm any people rather It facilitate the work to accomplish on time and in substantial rate.However,some people are being contacted by many kind of diseases because of the introduction of the new technology.
Firstly,technology has been one of the most precious thing for every business man to carry out there project successful .There are saving lots of money as well as they are boosting their economy further which has really helped them to invest more in innovation and research and which has helped to rise up the economy of the country.This is the result of technology and It's utilization.
Secondly, Many firms and companies are in the race of earning money and reducing man power ,so that they are not much considering about the safety and security of the public before establishing the company as a result people are facing different kinds of diseases. Some disease can be cured and some are very dangerous like radiations based diseases .It's very difficult to cure.So they are making environment with more problems.
To sum up, in everything has their own trade off that's why we should make the standard rules and regulations about opening new business with rich technology along with we try to aware the people about protecting and keeping the environment clean.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, i think, kind of, as a result, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1354.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14828897338 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1551925558 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604562737643 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.754849599 49.4020404114 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 225.666666667 106.682146367 212% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 43.8333333333 20.7667163134 211% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.3333333333 7.06120827912 288% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160284012373 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698244511461 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.057684650711 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840474801602 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0635037007229 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.7 13.0946893788 189% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 19.37 50.2224549098 39% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.48 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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