Terrorism is among the principal dangers facing people this century.As a result many people have lost their lives in young age without experiencing the long life but this can be tackled by offering very positive talks with many terrorist groups along with addressing their relevant demands.
To begin with,one of the main problem caused by the terrorism is that we are losing very innocent lives for no reasons. Many terrorist groups are not caring about victim people they focus on their political interests rather than people. Because of that so many people from all over the world sacrificing their lives in the name of terrorism. Small children loosing their parents and vice-versa .In addition,rest of the people are contacted by many stress disorder problems along with leading to the great frustrations.For instance,most of the people from Syria are facing post-traumatic stress disorder(PTSD), a kind of mental health problems triggered by a terrifying incident.
Furthermore,one of the effective solution to these problems is offering positive talks with terrorist groups and sorting out terrorism by addressing their relevant agenda.for this respective government should take initiatives and play vital role to make positive environment for communication with terrorist associates.Then,the decision making agency of the government should take steps forward to settle down the terrorism .For example,the Maoist and 7 political parties of Nepal had made an agreement which contributes to the peace of Nepal.
In conclusion,terrorism is the biggest challenge world facing present-day which can only be tackled by better communicating with terrorist groups in a very peaceful and trustful manner.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1456.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64341085271 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.19567943406 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585271317829 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 36.0 20.2975951904 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 148.644212941 49.4020404114 301% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.0 106.682146367 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 36.8571428571 20.7667163134 177% => OK
Discourse Markers: 17.4285714286 7.06120827912 247% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137009458488 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671956117023 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465040042119 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0947101294837 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0348039397372 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.6 13.0946893788 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.48 50.2224549098 53% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.02 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.95 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.4 10.1190380762 162% => OK
text_standard: 24.0 10.7795591182 223% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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